wow another poem :P

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i am beyond what you medicate me to be
i believe beyond the reailty you froce feed me
i jump through the hopes of flame out of faith
i tried my way but i failed leaving me a wraith
lightning cracks and sparkes inside my brain
the weather behind my eyes rages unseen
the curtian begins to fall away
i have my script and i will play
the amount i suffer i don’t give a damn
i have chosen to live the best that i can
i have survived so many different realities
my strength has always been my eternity
the human condition isn’t for me
my heart has been forever torn
i want to transend this reaility
i need to be reborn
the amount i suffer i don’t give a damn
i have chosen to live the best that i can
i want to transend this reaility
i need to be reborn

October 17, 2011 at 5:06 pm
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Daniel (7) (@meta) 6 years, 1 month ago ago

Freaking awesome, both the writing and the message it conveys.

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Anonymous (0) (@) 6 years, 1 month ago ago

@daniel thanks :)

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Ray Butler (1,422)M (@trek79) 6 years, 1 month ago ago

derek, I love art in it’s many forms. I fancy myself a writer, fiction, but I love paintings, poems, music and various means of expression. Huge fan of Irish literature, eg William Butler Yates.
I enjoyed that, thanks.

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