Check this poem I wrote

micah (@mp01255) 8 years, 2 months ago

Art is cool cuz it comes from the heart
So much bullshit nowadays its hard to decipher apart
Clear your head don’t let drugs be your doom
Ignore that statement if you find some shrooms
Few of your friends care enough to be honest
For the ones that do don’t break your promise

Clear the distractions make shit happen
Cuz you never know, what could happen
Few things are as bad as your mind might make it
So don’t look at the risk, look at the opportunity and take it
Work out hard so your bitch don’t have to fake it
All you have is your heart, choose wisely where you place it

April 22, 2014 at 11:20 pm
Marcus Salvator (2) (@springdei) 8 years, 2 months ago ago

I like the ideas and straightforwardness of it and the fact that it is somewhat like a mini motivational speech. Those qualities though may or may not make people become attached to it as there is not much mystique to it and all the meaning is right out there in the open. Over all keep it up! And not to impose but this inspired me to write this real quick:
Pit paddle down the road with a load quite overbearing.
The children walking down the sidewalk
They are hardly caring, always staring at strangers.
A manger was too much to manage for a young god.
I applaud, your arrogance it compliments my malevolence and lately I’ve been relishing
In the fact that little children stare at me when I walk down the street
Because i’m colder than ice and the person they will never get to be.

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yogatiger (1) (@yogatiger) 8 years, 2 months ago ago

This is great. And so so relevant. Don’t you love those moments when the universe leads you to something that you really needed to hear?

Much love.

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Falken (3) (@Falken) 8 years, 2 months ago ago

I like it a lot. I like that it’s straight forward, easy but relevant. The shroom line made me laugh.

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Reverend HKB (0) (@Dr Eager) 8 years, 2 months ago ago

Nice work

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