Clarity

Introspectivity (@Introspectivity) 7 years, 5 months ago

Here’s a short poem that I wrote a few months ago. I’d appreciate any thoughts and criticisms. Please share poems of your own too!

Moving in the stillest way possible. Standing at attention but dancing ever so gently at the slightest slip of the air.
Such a dim light for the room, yet such an incandescent beacon for the mind.
A subtle glint, yet an undeniable radiance.
Clarity at last.

March 9, 2015 at 4:28 pm
Heart Before Mind (526) (@HeartBeforeMind) 7 years, 5 months ago ago

I like your style of poetry, describing moments where the world seems to stand still and you are flowing with life. Good stuff.

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Introspectivity (32) (@Introspectivity) 7 years, 5 months ago ago

Thank you for understanding

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Inlighten (133) (@inlighten) 7 years, 5 months ago ago

Beautiful

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Introspectivity (32) (@Introspectivity) 7 years, 5 months ago ago

Thank you so much!

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Anonymous (0) (@) 7 years, 5 months ago ago

very nice, thanks for posting :)

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