Temporary Love

ces’t la vie (@citygirl9050) 6 years, 8 months ago

I wrote a poem about temporary love in our generation. In my generation. Please tell me what you think :).

Temporary Love

  • Observe me and take note
  • For I am fleeting away
  • The thing is, I’m on the same boat
  • But that won’t make me stay
  • I am easy to find
  • So lonely, be not!
  • You can leave me behind
  • Or take what you want
  • I am a kiss at two at night
  • I am a text of hey
  • I don’t really care if you’re alright
  • I just want to play.
  • I will make your heart sink
  • But I will also give you hope
  • I will make you think
  • And momentarily help you cope.
  • At the end of the day
  • I am only a friend
  • I will vanish away
  • Because I have an end
  • One day you’ll keep me…
  • And you’ll rise above
  • I’ll be something bigger, you’ll see
  • I will be lasting love.
December 1, 2015 at 11:38 pm
Tao.Reggie (12) (@Tao.Rep) 6 years, 8 months ago ago

I like it, keep it up!

MonkeyZazu (1,865)M (@monkeyzazu) 6 years, 8 months ago ago

Wish I could favorite this. It could’ve had better flow in my opinion, but I liked the over all poem.

William (1) (@William-Taylor) 6 years, 8 months ago ago

Me Gusta

ces’t la vie (197) (@citygirl9050) 6 years, 8 months ago ago

thank you people:)

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